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caballero pg. 1 by weshoyot caballero pg. 1 by weshoyot
written by todd michael rogers, art by me.
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:iconsergiovaz:
damn great!!..

youre really good..


have a great day =)!
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:iconkoloblican11763:
Koloblican11763 Feb 12, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Maybe this one could preface the title page (page 2) with all of the info that needs to be said. Assuming that I know what I'm talking about (which I'm not a hundred percent :P) you could put the author and your name on this page in a sort of "Todd and Wes presents..." style, than on the next page above the character you can have the title in large stylistic block letters. I think that could be a great way to introduce this graphic novel. It would be like starting out a movie. The build up than the title pops out at you with a bang.

But that's just my opinion. What do you think you are going to be doing with it? I'd like to get a glimpse :). And I don't know an extensive amount of graphic novel design, feel free to correct me if I have no idea what I'm saying (haha).
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:iconweshoyot:
hahaha. pg 1 has narrator bubbles for each panel, and then pg 2 was actually my idea, because i felt it needed a sweet splash page for impact before pg 2b which is actually the original page 2. i almost have pg 3 done now, so you can see if it works or not.

i had envisioned pg 2 (the splash) as a title page with creators on it near the top. if nothing else, it was just to appease my own desire to draw it.LOL
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Koloblican11763 Feb 12, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Lol, nice.

Well good luck.
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:iconsilverlady7:
I found your gallery through the Caballero page 2 at the Daily Deviations - very good work! Now I´m curious - is this story silent (no balloons, just images) or do you plan to put it baloons when it´s published?

Advice: it would be more practical for us to follow the story if you linked the pages.
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:iconweshoyot:
cool....i was trying to figure out why i suddenly had a ton of hits. the story does have words, it's being lettered right now. it will be colored too, so stay tuned.

how do i link the pages?? like put them in a folder? or add links to the other pages in the description? TIA!
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:iconsilverlady7:
Just copy the link of one page (CONTROL+C). Then go to the previous page and click on Edit Button. At the comments, CONTROL+V the link you copied and write aside "Next". You can also give link for the previous pages; just do the same at them and write "Previous" aside.
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JesseAcosta Feb 12, 2009  Professional General Artist
Very interesting, I like the style. This guy looks more like a Vaquero than a Caballero though ;)
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:iconweshoyot:
im going to have to discuss that with the writer...is that a good or bad thing?
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